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Friday, November 16, 2007

Amendment

I've made an improvement (I hope) to the cross-talking lull before the big ending of the parody of When the Foeman Bears His Steel (entitled Of Mice and Menopause):

So why the smirk?
Oh, just be-cuz.
Was that a jerk?
Perhaps it was.
It starts to perk?
It starts to buzz.
You think it'll work?
In fact it does!
Good gravy! what a stick!
Good gravy! that was quick! etc.

Lyric © 2007 Nathaniel DesH. Petrikov

That comes a good deal closer to my original idea. The whole good to go thing still seems a bit limp, but nothing to replace it has presented itself.

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